That is a beautiful, evocative piece of verse. You’ve captured the “liminal space” of twilight—that brief moment where the world is neither day nor night, but a shifting gallery of color.
Your choice of words like commingles and nimbi gives the poem a sophisticated, almost ethereal texture. It feels as though the sky isn’t just changing; it’s being actively painted by a conscious force. Thank you for this. Much peace and happiness to you ~🕊️
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That is a beautiful, evocative piece of verse. You’ve captured the “liminal space” of twilight—that brief moment where the world is neither day nor night, but a shifting gallery of color.
Your choice of words like commingles and nimbi gives the poem a sophisticated, almost ethereal texture. It feels as though the sky isn’t just changing; it’s being actively painted by a conscious force. Thank you for this. Much peace and happiness to you ~🕊️
Many thanx for your inspiring words, Linda. Have a wonderful day!
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